Introduction to Shakespearian Sonnets
Sonnet 130
by William Shakespeare
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.
This poem is the most famous example of the "Dark Lady" sequence (Sonnets 127–152). In this sonnet, Shakespeare provides a realistic, unvarnished description of his mistress. Unlike the "Fair Youth," who is often described with celestial and angelic imagery, the woman here is grounded and imperfect. The poem confirms her identity as the "Dark Lady" through specific physical descriptors found in the first section. When the poet describes her breasts as "dun" (a dull, brownish-grey color) and her hair as "black wires," he is explicitly contrasting her with the Elizabethan ideal of beauty, which favored snow-white skin and golden, silky hair. This is not a poem about a goddess, but about a real, flesh-and-blood woman of a darker complexion.
Analysis of the Octet (The First Eight Lines)
Although this is a Shakespearean sonnet (divided into three quatrains), the first eight lines—which can be viewed as the octet—establish the poem’s central argument: a rejection of unrealistic metaphors. Shakespeare uses a series of "anti-similes" and negative comparisons to mock traditional love poetry. He begins by stating "My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun," directly contradicting the standard Petrarchan trope where a lover's eyes are brighter than the sun. He continues with visual imagery, noting that "coral is far more red" than her lips. The use of the word "wires" to describe her hair is a harsh metaphor; in the 16th century, poets often compared beautiful hair to gold wires, but here they are "black wires," suggesting a coarse or stiff texture. He also uses the word "damask'd" regarding roses. A damask rose is a specific variety known for its mingled red and white coloring. The poet complains that while he has seen such roses in nature, he sees "no such roses" in her cheeks, implying she does not have the polite, rosy blush of a typical poetic maiden.
Analysis of the Sestet (The Final Six Lines) and The Volta
The final six lines (the third quatrain and the couplet) move from visual descriptions to other senses, specifically smell and sound. In the third quatrain, Shakespeare uses a blunt olfactory (smell) image: "the breath that from my mistress reeks." While "reeks" in Shakespeare’s time simply meant "emanates" or "steams" and wasn't quite as negative as it is today, it stands in sharp contrast to the "perfumes" mentioned in the previous line. He then moves to auditory imagery, admitting that while he loves to hear her speak, "music hath a far more pleasing sound." Finally, he attacks the way poets describe movement. While traditional poets claim their lovers are goddesses who float on air, Shakespeare insists his mistress "treads on the ground." She walks heavily; she is human.
The Couplet and The Volta
The "volta," or the turn in thought, occurs at the very beginning of the final couplet with the words "And yet." After twelve lines of listing her flaws and detailing how she fails to measure up to artificial standards, the tone shifts from critical to affectionate. The couplet reads: "And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare / As any she belied with false compare." Here, the word "belied" is crucial; it means "falsely represented" or "lied about." The poet concludes that his mistress is just as valuable ("rare") as any of those women who are falsely compared to suns and goddesses. He is not insulting her in this poem; he is insulting other poets who use lazy, lying metaphors. He loves her for who she actually is, rather than for a fake ideal.
Summary of Literary Devices
Throughout the text, Shakespeare relies heavily on sensory imagery. The visual imagery includes the sun, red coral, white snow, and damask roses. The most striking metaphor is the comparison of hair to "black wires." The poem is essentially built on "negative similes"—comparisons that say what she is not (not like the sun, not like music, not like a goddess). This technique serves the poem’s satirical purpose, deconstructing the artificial way men wrote about women during the Renaissance to reveal a more honest, and perhaps stronger, form of love.
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